by Olivia Cronk
In miniature
in firmament
I crawl to the finger face
to unclaw it all at once.
Why if it isn’t phoenix burning
and burning and praising
in ghostly bare symmetry.
Hello de-tipped mountains.
Hello possessed corpse.
I hold its smug head
and its smug unsniffed hair.
It tells me we are swinging tongueless
to watch our jaws fished.
In firmament the brain calls to be born uncrawling.
I eat it all at once.
I love the build to the last stanza, and the image of us "swinging tongueless / to watch our jaws fished." I love the echoing images that compete there, particularly with "jaws"--our mouths/jaw fished? jaws the shark? Very cool.
Posted by: brandon heckman | 04/27/2009 at 10:51 AM