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easy after eight,
the work-late slouch,
the florescent confessional
Posted by: dk | 07/11/2009 at 01:21 PM
the metamorphosis chamber
a grind forgotten
Posted by: tam | 07/11/2009 at 01:29 PM
"we keep the wound open"
he looks away
Posted by: Elizabeth Terrazas | 07/11/2009 at 01:55 PM
if life were a championship, he thinks,
this moment would be broadcast
with not-so-witty commentary
(pause)
and then he thinks, i am alone in public, he thinks,
after losing for so long
one goal would drive the crowd mad
Posted by: dk | 07/11/2009 at 03:12 PM
the chamber shakes and rattles
the chamber waits for love
Posted by: megan martin | 07/13/2009 at 07:00 AM
Kafka in the corner sips brandy
charcoal pinstripe black Oxfords
London, Paris: here Montgomery
a stroller cavorts
Posted by: Elizabeth Terrazas | 07/14/2009 at 05:10 PM
thick crowd. . . hums. . .
tunnel-bound. . . wrapped. . . up. . .
about to be. . . delivered. . .
Posted by: the frank | 08/16/2009 at 01:45 PM