Poem in Comments: In Transit

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Image by Elizabeth Terrazas

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[dk]

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the work-late slouch,
the florescent confessional

[tam]

the metamorphosis chamber
a grind forgotten

[Elizabeth Terrazas]

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he looks away

[dk]

if life were a championship, he thinks,
this moment would be broadcast
with not-so-witty commentary

(pause)
and then he thinks, i am alone in public, he thinks,
after losing for so long
one goal would drive the crowd mad

[megan martin]

the chamber shakes and rattles
the chamber waits for love

[Elizabeth Terrazas]

Kafka in the corner sips brandy
charcoal pinstripe black Oxfords
London, Paris: here Montgomery
a stroller cavorts

[the frank]

thick crowd. . . hums. . .
tunnel-bound. . . wrapped. . . up. . .
about to be. . . delivered. . .

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